Friday, November 12, 2010

The Last One : )

I'm looking myself in a mirror
and thinking of all my errors
asking if i'm good ?
he answered"no, dude",
asking if i'm better ?
he answered "no, talk sweeter",
asking if i'm best
he answered 'no, why is it your brain don't have space?",


I'm looking myself in the water
and thinking they are better
asking if i could stop ?
he answered"yes, you could really stop",
asking if i have talent ?
he answered "none, you are impotent",
asking if i can beat them ?
he answered "no, you have to face problem",


As I look myself
why is this my fate ?
and begging for help
they shouted me "in your face !"
stop my imagination
that i can't write poem


As I look myself again
there are voice saying "put down the pen"
and realize the truth
that i cant be best
because im like a trash
that must be crash


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4 comments:

  1. sorry this is the last, thats irrevocable . . .

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  2. No, this can't be the last ... This is the start..
    Stop underestimating yourself. We're not competing against each other. you know what? I'm certain that you could do it! Trust yourself.

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  3. ayoko na, last na yan, hindi na ako gagawa, halata naman na hindi talaga ako magaling eh, trying hard lng ako, baka nga pinagatatawanan na ako ng iba na nakakabasa ng mga poem, hihintayion ko na lng yung mga magagandag poem na isususulat nyo, kaya nyo yan ! !

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